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我仍然喜歡這個故事,但我必須說,戈爾多可怕,很有缺陷的。
I still like the story and all, but I gotta say, it's more gore than scary and it's very flawed.
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其可怕的!他們著急,讓他們的個性有擔心隨著時間的推移,但這只是被迫的。寫作是可怕的,節奏是,主角是制服。事實上它使用強奸和亂倫只是使他們的性格有同情點惡心!讓你恐怖人物同情和可怕的極其困難,和從我看過creepypastas像這樣,沒有人能實現。你可以死于你的眼睛感染擠壓我在你的眼睛時鐘,時鐘!
Its just awful! They try so hard to make their character have a fear with time, but it is just so forced. The writing is awful, the pacing is way off, and the main character is overpowered. The fact it uses rape and incest only to make their character have sympathy points is disgusting! MAKING YOUR HORROR CHARACTER SYMPATHETIC AND SCARY IS INCREDIBLY HARD, and from what I have seen from creepypastas like this, no one can achieve. You can go die from your eye infection from squeezing I clock in your eye, Clockwork!
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