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一直。一直。做。這個。我的組織代碼名:艾維帕戰士名字艾維弗羅斯特蘭:戰士學徒氏族:風暴氏族定制氏族我創造了一個叫伊文德-她貓友:還沒有,但未來的伴侶將是橡樹樹。貓友:我還不知道,雖然可能會為了保護某個家庭而死去:媽媽Hollypelt爸爸Greypool姐姐-天爪戰士名字SkypeltLooks:白色,有銀灰色條紋。她的腿和尾巴尖上有額外的條紋。她還有淺綠色的眼睛,有粉色的爪墊和粉色的鼻子。她的鼻子上半部分是深粉色,而下半部分是亮粉色的。—艾維帕
Always. Always. Do. This.My OC-Name: Ivypaw (Warrior name Ivyfrost)Rank: Warrior apprenticeClan: StormClan (custom clan Ive created)Gender- She-catMate: (None yet, but future mate will be Oakstripe)Death: I dont know yet, though probably will die protecting something)Family: Mom-Hollypelt Dad-Greypool Sister- Skypaw (Warrior name Skypelt)Looks: White, with silvery light grey stripes. She has extra stripes on her legs and the tip of her tail. She also has light green eyes, with pink paw pads and a pink nose. The top half of her nose is a darker pink, while the bottom half is bright pink.-Ivypaw
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當角色被發展時,它會讓讀者覺得他們更人性化——不是因為他們是貓,而是因為他們的思想、行為和情感更人性化人物:-是嗎你有優勢嗎?-他們有缺點嗎?-他們在優點和缺點之間有很好的平衡嗎?-他們的目標是什么?故事里有什么變化嗎?-他們為什么這么做?-他們有什么樣的關系?-人物和故事開始時一樣嗎?是什么改變了他們?如果你想讓人們更關心次要角色,試著給他們更多的個性和與主要角色有意義的互動
When characters are developed, it makes them feel more human to the reader (well not physically human because they're cats, but more human-like with thoughts and actions and emotions).Things to think about when developing your characters:-do they have strengths?-do they have flaws?-do they have a good balance between strengths and flaws?-what is their goal? Does it change anywhere in the story?-why do they do what they do?-what kind of relationships do they have?-are the characters the same as they were at the start of the story? What could have changed them?Also make sure to give some of the background clanmates personality. If you want people to care more about the minor characters, try giving them more personality and meaningful interaction with the main characters. - Heedrie
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是啊,沙德,我的oc很漂亮,有點邪惡,很強大,有信任問題,不相信星際
Yeah Shard, my oc isBeautifulReckless(Slightly) EvilStubbornPowerfulHas trust issuesDosen't believe in StarClan
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