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這是一個寫得很好的故事,我不完全怪簡想報復杰夫。如果有人殺了我的家人,我也要報復。但是,每個人,包括杰夫的家人,都忘了杰夫經歷了什么。他們甚至從來沒有考慮過蘭迪、基思和特洛伊對他做了什么,這就是他成為今天這樣的原因,杰夫最終后悔殺了他的家人,尤其是劉翔,他曾經為保護劉翔而戰斗過,所以他不可能都是壞人
It is a very well written story and I don't totally blame Jane for wanting to get even with Jeff. I would want revenge too if someone killed my family. However, everyone, including Jeff's family, forget what Jeff went through. They never even considered what Randy, Keith, and Troy did to him, which is what made him what he is today. And Jeff does eventually regret killing his family, especially Liu, whom he once fought to protect, so he can't be all bad.
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我只是不太喜歡這個故事。杰夫是怎么進入酒店和酒吧的,眼皮燒焦了,臉上刻著笑容?如果簡不打算殺杰夫,她為什么要和杰夫一起去旅館?為什么簡一直等著殺杰夫?我有更多的問題,我有點吹毛求疵。如果你喜歡這個故事,那是絕對好的,我就是不喜歡
I just didn't like this story too much. How does Jeff get into a hotel and bar WITH BURNED OUT EYELIDS AND A SMILE CARVED IN? Why did Jane go to the hotel with Jeff if she wasn't going to kill him? Why did Jane wait for FOREVER to kill Jeff?I have more questions and I am nitpicking a little bit. If you like this story that is absolutely fine, I just don't.
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我討厭人們認為簡只是杰夫的女孩版。事實并非如此。杰夫創造簡的基本方法是摧毀她的生命和她的臉。我是說,他和他一樣用汽油和漂白劑燒了她
I hate that people think that Jane is just the girl version of Jeff. That's not really the case. Jeff created Jane basically by destroying her life and her face. I mean he burned her with gasoline and bleach just like him.
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我喜歡這個。我總是喜歡有一個女孩版本的東西,他們互相抵觸。我喜歡當你讀簡的故事時你能感受到她的憤怒。至少我喜歡
I love this one. I always like when there is a girl version of something and they go against each other. I love how you can feel the anger of jane when you read her story. Well at least I did.
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我喜歡這個故事,但是簡,你真的認為殺人杰夫會發瘋,但一個好的故事卻很棒嗎
I love the story but jane do you really think that killing people jeff will get mad but still a good story its awesome
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我很討厭這兩個故事的情節。我都很討厭這兩個故事
I read both there storys. I see why jane hates him. Both storys are actily around the same story in some parts. I love the story line.
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哦天啊是的!我很喜歡這個故事,但為什么人們要把它們運過來?誰在乎呢,不過這故事太棒了!-阿普斯塔姆333
Aw god yes! I frigging love this story but why do people ship them? Who cares, great story though! - ArpstaAmy333
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這是一個偉大的令人毛骨悚然的原因有很多
This was a great creepypasta for many reasons
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我最喜歡的。如果你同意的話。認識他們的人對我都很好
My favorite. Ifyou agree coment. Everyone who knows them is fine by me.
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真是令人嘆為觀止
It was breath taking
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