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我覺得這個故事比《殺手杰夫》要好得多,一個是因為它寫得更好,但主要是因為它非常現實。一個十幾歲的男孩割著臉卻不受感染,頭發被火燒死是不可能的。這就是為什么它不可怕的原因。更接近現實的事情更可怕,因為它可能發生。孩子們被年長的男人跟蹤的事情時有發生,這是可怕的。事實上,這個故事使主人公對發生的事情如此無知,而讀者可以理解它是做得這么好。就像當他發現毯子和食物在他的房子下面,他不知道為什么他們在那里,使這么大的事情另一方面,讀者可以看到他們為什么在那里,這在營造一個偉大的氛圍方面是如此有效。這個故事也讓你在某些情況下連接點。你越是弄清楚發生了什么,你就越擔心人物。結局絕對不是失望。每一個……更多
I find this story much better than say Jeff the killer, one because it's written better, but mostly because it's very realistic. A teenage boy cutting his face without getting an infection somehow and dying his hair with fire is just impossible. That's why it isn't scary. Things that are closer to reality are way more scary because it could happen. Kids getting stalked by older men happens all the time and that's terrifying. The fact the story makes the main character so clueless to the things happening while the reader can make sense of it is done so well. Like when he finds the blankets and food under his house he has no idea why they're there and makes so big deal out of it. The reader on the other hand can see why they're there and it's so effective in creating a great atmosphere. The story also leaves you to connect the dots in some cases. The more and more you figure out what's going on the more you fear for the characters. The ending was definitely not a disappointment. Every ... more
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我一直在查“有史以來最好的爬行動物”的名單,很驚訝我花了這么長時間才在名單上找到這個。我找到的是名單上的38號,特別是在讀了很多其他的名單后,我不明白它怎么會在名單上這么低。當我讀到最后一段的時候,我感到很冷,這是非常感人的。作者是一個優秀的作家,應該考慮寫完整的小說。10++/10肯定是我讀過的最好的
I've been looking up lists of "The Best Creepypastas Ever" and am extremely surprised it took me so long to find this one on a list. It's at number 38 on the list that I found and, especially after reading a lot of the other ones, I don't understand how it could be so low on the list. I got chills big time when I read the last paragraph, it was extremely moving. The author is an excellent writer and should consider writing full novels. 10+/10 definintely the best I've read.
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我很高興地向大家宣布,Penpal已經擴展,一部長篇小說已經發布!你可以在亞馬遜上買到。-太棒了
I am happy to announce to you that Penpal has been expanded, and a full length novel has been released! You can get it on Amazon. - GREATEST
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但不幸的是,這部小說的最后一部分《精神病》和《精神病患者》都是我最喜歡的一部它收到了
One of my favorites, along with Psychosis. I voted Penpal, however, because even though I like Psychosis better, Penpal is terrifying because it could, and sadly has, happened. The deaths of people close to him also show how evil humans can be and the last little part about Josh teared me up. This is a beautiful story, and deserves the novel it received.
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我可以很容易地說,我找不到另一個可怕的帕斯塔相比,在我看來,應該高于杰夫。發現這個可怕的,令人不安的,最好的書面和最詳細的恐怖帕斯塔迄今為止。這值得一個獎項。閱讀它所有我加倫特你不會失望。筆友在名單上的位置不公正
I can easily say I cannot find another creepypasta in comparison to this, should be above jeff in my opinion. Found this scary, disturbing, the best written and the most detailed creepypasta to date. This deserves an award. Read it all I garentee you will not be disappointed. Penpals position in the list DOES NOT do it justice.
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這可能是我讀過的最優秀的恐怖小說了。雖然篇幅很長,但這只會讓故事比杰夫、蒂奇·托比或斯倫迪更復雜。這本書應該是第一本。順便說一句,作為一個令人毛骨悚然的書,在我讀完這本書一周后,我的貓失蹤了
This is probably the most well written piece of horror fiction I've ever read.It's so long, but that just makes the stories more intricate than stuff like Jeff, Ticci Toby or Slendy.This really should be number one.And, by the way, as a little creepy titbit, a week after I finished reading this, my cat went missing.
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我真的很惱火像殺手杰夫、耙子和苗條男人這樣的怪物被高估了。這部杰作應該是第一名
I am seriously pissed at how overrated creepypastas like Jeff the killer, the rake, and slenderman are. This masterpiece should be number one
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它可能很長,但一切聯系如此順利參考過去的事件和小事成為一個大的影響,很容易我的最愛!
It may be long but everything connects so smoothly referencing past events and small things becoming a large impact, easily my favorite!
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關于這個令人毛骨悚然的阿斯塔,最令人不安的是,所有這些都是可能的,而且它的寫作方式非常出色
The most disturbing thing about this creepypasta is that all this is possible and the way in which it's written is just brilliant.
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我讀過很多令人毛骨悚然的意大利面,但這一個為我拿蛋糕。它寫得太好了,應該拍成電影!
I have read a lot of creepy pastas, but this one takes the cake for me. It's so well written, it should be made into a movie!
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