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每個人都討厭發條,但我認為這是同一個作者寫的,更糟。它是如此陳腐,陳腐和愚蠢。主人公是你典型的精神病陳詞濫調,父親角色是你典型的虐待父母陳詞濫調,母親甚至不足以成為一個角色談論她。還有,不必要的苗條男人的外表
Everyone keeps hating on Clockwork, but I this one (by the same author, I believe) is much worse. It's just so cliched, trite and stupid. The protagonist is your typical insane psycho cliche, father character is your typical abusive parent cliche, and mother isn't even enough of a character to talk about her. Also, unnecessary Slenderman appearance.
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Clockwork和ticci toby是由兩位不同的作者寫的-禍害最嚴重
Clockwork and ticci toby are by two different authors - scourgeisdabest
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我喜歡他,但即使這個故事寫得很好,它幾乎有我能想到的所有陳詞濫調。但最糟糕的是他對他做了什么。沒有人會那么高興后,那背后的故事。他甚至不應該相信別人那么好
I like him, but even though is story is well written, it had almost every cliche I could think of for a Creepypasta. But what's worst is what he fangirls did to him. NOBODY would be that happy after that backstory. He shouldn't even trust others that well.
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一個感覺不到痛苦的男孩真的很生氣,殺了他的爸爸。然后他燒了自己,變成了代理人,耶?這是一個簡單的故事,它是如此膚淺和陳詞濫調,作者可以去掉所有毫無意義的細節,它不會有任何不同。-阿林金
A boy that can't feel pain gets really angry and kill his dad. He then burns himself and becomes a proxy, yay? That's pretty much the story in a nutshell, it is so shallow and clich茅 that the author could've taken out all the pointless details and it wouldn't be any different. - AlienKing
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老實說,你可以在整個故事中感受到一些情感
Pretty good to be honest you can actually feel some emotion throughout the story. - XxembermasterxX
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這是好的,至少有一個可信的動機-頑固的球迷
This is good had a believable motivation for the least part - diehardfan
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不,提奇·托比是個偉大的人物!我生你的氣了!
No, Ticci Toby is a great character! I mad at you!
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但情節有點扭曲
That plot twist though
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喜歡,雖然很老套
Liked it,though very cliche.
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我喜歡這個令人毛骨悚然的阿斯塔..我不是來討厭它的..我只需要把它弄出來:3
I LOVED this creepypasta...i'm not here to hate on it...I just needed to get that out :3
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