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寫得很好,提綱也做得很好。故事可以分為2,3,甚至5個主要的主題部分。唯一的一點是,據說馬克的結局非常突然。但誰知道這可能是有原因的!
Very well written and the outline is well made. The story can be divided into 2,3 or even 5 major themed parts. The only point is that Mark is originally said to have a very abrupt ending. But who knows maybe even that was for a reason!
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