兇手杰夫歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類在歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類中排名第1名。

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事實上，這么多人都說這是“寫得好”是對合法作家的一種侮辱。這個故事情節是難以置信的精心設計和不切實際的，每個角色都平淡無奇，沒有個性，尤其是杰夫，他從一個完全正常的人，偶爾會有“奇怪的感覺”，瞬間就變成了一個殺人的反社會者，杰夫99%的傷都是可笑的，因為他被點燃，皮膚變白，嘴唇變紅，頭發變黑？多科學啊！杰夫霍普的照片很明顯已經被感染了，而且這張照片還沒有被剪去在高中的時候？這幅畫顯然是個成年人

The fact that so many people are calling this "well-written" is honestly insulting to legitimate writers. The plot is incredibly contrived and unrealistic, every character is flat with no personality (especially Jeff, who flips from perfectly normal with occasional "strange feelings" to a homicidal sociopath in a second), and 99% of Jeff's injuries are ridiculous (after being lit on fire, his skin turned white, lips red, and hair black? How scientific! Not to mention how Jeff hasn't gone blind from dust and bacteria after burning his eyelids off, and how his cliche knife-carved "smile" hasn't gotten infected without medical treatment). The scariest thing about this story is its picture, which, after a couple years, has become very dated and obviously photoshopped (also, isn't Jeff supposed to be in, like, high school? The picture is clearly a grown man).

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我看了這個，一點也不嚇人。只是有人殺人。我只是覺得有點不安。這個畫面并不嚇人，只是一張白皙的臉，帶著眼睛和微笑。寫得很糟糕。杰夫失去了我們的控制，開始無緣無故地殺害所有人。沒有理由隨意殺人。毫無意義。我不敢相信警察還沒有抓到他。只有一架該死的直升機和一支軍隊，他只是一個拿著刀的孩子。你有所有的力量。他沒有。寫這篇文章的人都很懶。對那些認為虛構人物很“辣”的人，我希望你能把腦子修好。來找我

I read this, and it wasn't scary at all. It's just someone who kills people. I only find it kind of disturbing. And this image isn't scary, just a plain white face with eyes and a smile. This is badly written. Jeff just gets our of control and starts killing everyone for no explainable reason. There is no reason to kill random people. Nothing makes sense. And I can't believe the police hasn't caught him yet. Just gets a damn helicopter and an army, he's just a kid with a knife. You have all the power. He doesn't. Whoever wrote this is LAZY. And to his fangirls who think a fictional character is "hot", I hope you get your brain fixed. Come at me

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這孩子的態度，他的力量，或者是他的數量。FANGIRLS需要把他們的頭從他的屁股里拿出來，表現得像一個普通的討厭的意大利面迷，而不是和一個殺人犯一起吃任何令人毛骨悚然的意大利面。我最喜歡的令人毛骨悚然的意大利面是在樓梯上。閱讀它，這樣你就能真正領略到什么是一個好故事。一秒鐘是一個普通的情緒少年，也有一個戲劇性的問題。下一個，他是連環殺手？什么，就因為漂白劑。漂白劑。我可以在這個故事里加上一句，他13歲？他13歲，能躲過警察的子彈，殺了他全家，還可以當個“壞蛋”？！？！不！作者后來確實改變了這一點，但這個故事仍然是一個可悲的浪費時間。回顧一下；1.芳吉爾需要像一個真正的粉絲一樣讀一些好的令人毛骨悚然的意大利面，而不是寫杰夫或任何一個毛骨悚然的巴斯塔的粉絲。尊重網站。你應該感到害怕，而不是高潮。2.這個故事寫得很糟糕，而且非常更奇特的

This kid has no excuse for his attitude, his strength, or his amount if FANGIRLS. FANGIRLS need to get their heads outta his ass and actually act like a normal creepy pasta fan and not go goo goo for any creepy pasta with a homicidal guy. My favorite creepy pasta is The Stairs. (Read it so you can actually get a decent taste of what a good story is.) One second is a normal emo teen that has too much of a drama issue. The next, he's a serial killer? What, just because of some bleach. BLEACH. And might I add that in this story, he's 13? he's 13 AND CAN DODGE ALL THE POLICE'S BULLETS, KILL HIS ENTIRE FAMILY, AND BE A "Badass"?!?! NO! The writer did change this later on but the story was still a pathetic waste of time. To recap;1. FANGIRLS need to read some good creepy pasta like an actual fan would and not write fan fics of Jeff, or any creepypasta. Respect the website. You are supposed to get scared, not have a orgasm.2. The story is poorly written and very ... more - Peculiar

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一開始我以為這很嚇人，但當我上了科學課，我馬上意識到這是錯的。在很多方面都是錯的。他被燒焦和漂白，但他的皮膚變白，嘴唇變脆變紅，頭發變黑？這甚至不符合生物學，更不用說科學了。他那精雕細琢的笑容，自從他在樹林里到處跑來跑去，沒有因為不能眨眼而被太陽曬傷，也沒有失明。他從一個漫不經心的少年變成了一個有著“奇怪感覺”的人，然后一個完整的精神病患者在一個章節里。邏輯。-分裂

At first I thought this was generally scary, but then when I got my science classes, I knew immediately that this was...wrong. Wrong in so many ways. He gets burned and bleached, but his skin turns white, lips crisp and red, and his hair black? That wouldn't even fit in biology, let alone science. His carved smile hasn't got infected without medical treatment, since he runs around in the woods and all. His eyes haven't burned up from the sun via not being able to blink, nor has he gone blind in the least. He goes from casual teenager to someone with "weird feels", and then a complete psycho in one chapter. LOGIC. - Diistortions

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被高估為垃圾。怎么沒人看到他們的戰斗？2.警察真的會把杰夫送到朱維他們真的沒那么蠢3.蘭迪和他的幫派幾天后從骨折和刺傷中恢復過來4.他根本不應該有頭發，它應該都被燒掉了。5.他的皮膚不會變白6.杰夫應該在燒眼皮的時候把眼睛燒壞。7.即使杰夫設法不燒傷眼睛，他也會失明，因為灰塵會進入他的眼睛。8.如果不接受治療，微笑會感染的。9.他的父母不會報警或叫救護車，不是嗎剛接到一槍。杰夫無緣無故地殺了他的家人。杰夫無緣無故地發瘋了。你要么生來就是個精神病患者，要么在經歷了創傷后變成了精神病患者，杰夫是個正常的孩子。完蛋了！

Overrated as crap1.How did NO ONE see their fight?2.The police would have really sent Jeff to Juvy they really are not that dumb.3. Randy and his gang recover from broken bones and stabs after DAYS.4.He shouldn't even have hair at all, it should be all burnt off.5.His skin wouldn't have turned white6.Jeff should have burned his eyes out while burning his lids.7.Even if Jeff managed to not burn his eyes he would go blind since dust will get in his eyes.8.Without medical treatment that smile will get infected.9.His parents don't call police or ambulance no they just got a SHOT GUN10. Jeff kills his family for no reason11.Jeff went insane for no reason. You are either born a psycopath or become one after traumatic events, Jeff was a normal kid.BUSTED!

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我承認我喜歡這個故事，也喜歡杰夫本人，但芳吉爾夫婦毀了他，我喜歡杰夫和他的故事，但后來芳吉爾一家來了，把一切都毀了，讓他變得少女氣，少了些血腥，先是《暮光之城》毀了吸血鬼，然后是埃莫小孩毀了金屬，現在這個？杰夫一點也不吸引人，但他看起來還是很酷的，因為他看起來很血腥。我不喜歡這個故事，因為杰夫很性感。我喜歡這個故事，因為杰夫看起來血淋淋的，我喜歡這個故事，他會制作一張很棒的食人尸專輯封面——countnightdark13

I'll admit I like the story and jeff himself but the fangirls ruined him for me I liked jeff and his story the way it was but then the fangirls came and ruined everything and made him all girly and less gory first twilight ruined vampires then emo kids ruined metal and now this? And jeff is not attractive in the slightest but he still looks really cool cause he looks really bloodyI don't like the story because jeff is "hot" I like the story because jeff looks very gory and bloody and I love that stuff and he would make a great cannibal corpse album cover - countnightdark13

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對于我不喜歡這個令人毛骨悚然的帕斯塔，我現在真的只能想到兩個主要原因：一是粉絲群太差了，看看這些人制作的各種獻禮藝術和游戲吧！他們認為，“噢，杰夫受夠了，我們應該為杰夫感到難過，他瘋了是因為[插入一些幻想的+/不現實的原因]。”伙計，我知道讓你的皮膚漂白是很瘋狂的，但這并不是去實施大規模謀殺或其他什么的真正理由。第二，這個故事沒有意義。一個怎么會被點燃，然后呢不知何故保留了他們所有的頭發，另外把頭發炭化成不同的顏色，漂白劑注入他們的皮膚，也不知何故設法不讓他們看起來像燒傷或其他什么？為什么那些孩子在第一次見面的時候就拿刀指著杰夫？原諒我不太了解這個故事，但我認為這些孩子就像12歲的孩子一樣。我以為12歲的孩子玩的是“地雷手藝”、“機器人游戲”和“使命召喚”，而不是在其他12歲的孩子身上拔刀……更多

I can only really think of two major reasons at the moment as to why I don't like this Creepypasta: One, the fanbase is terrible. Look at all the tribute art and games these people make! They think, "Oh, Jeff had it so hard, we should feel sorry for Jeff guys, he went insane because of [insert fanciful/unrealistic reason(s)]." Dude, I understand that getting your skin bleached is pretty crazy, but that's not really a reason to go and commit mass murder or whatever. Two, the story doesn't make sense. How is one lit on fire and somehow retains all of their hair, additionally charring it to a different color, have bleach become infused into their skin (that also somehow manages to not look burnt or whatever)? Why would those kids stick a knife on Jeff upon their first meeting? Forgive me for not really knowing the story well, but I think these kids are like TWELVE. I thought twelve year olds played Minecraft and Roblox and Call of Duty, not pulling knives on other twelve year olds FOR ... more

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我非常討厭這種火辣辣的意大利面，盡管《發條》這樣的故事更糟糕，但事實上，這種令人憎惡的東西如此受歡迎和喜愛，使我更加討厭它。作為一個非常喜歡苗條男人的人，盡管它不再可怕，每當我看到杰夫和修長被描繪成朋友時，我都會翻白眼。說真的。住手

I hate this Pasta with a burning passion, even though stories like Clockwork are worse, it's the fact that this abomination is so popular and loved that makes me hate it even more. And as someone who is a big fan of the Slender Man (even though it isn't scary anymore), I roll my eyes whenever I see Jeff and Slender being portrayed as friends. Seriously. Stop it.

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像這樣的垃圾故事的流行使得人們不可能對人類有任何信仰。當有那么多好的故事/作者在那里幾乎沒有得到任何關注的時候，看到人們贊揚這樣一個寫得不好、毫無意義的垃圾是件很痛苦的事。牛的心態是最好的

The popularity of garbage stories like this makes it impossible to have any faith in humanity. It's physically painful to see people praising such a poorly written, nonsensical piece of trash when there are so many other good stories/authors out there that get little to no attention at all. Cattle mentality at its finest.

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我真的很討厭主要的恐怖片。我討厭那些以殺手角色為原型的電影。我喜歡那些不需要殺戮就能寫出一個好故事的電影。這個故事里的很多東西都沒有意義。它寫得不好，或者嚇人。可怕。主要的令人毛骨悚然的意大利面粉絲們需要停止。這會毀了我的生活。我最喜歡的恐怖面食類型是1999年的諾恩德豪斯和類似的故事

I really HATE the main creepypastas. I HATE the ones based off of a killer character. I love ones that don't need killing to make a good story. A lot of the things in this story make no sense. It's not well written, or scary. Terrible. And fan girls of the main creepy pasta need to stop. It ruins it for me. My favorite type of creepy pasta is Noend House, 1999, and similar stories.