發條：你的時間到了(Clockwork: Your Time is Up)——歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類

發條：你的時間到了(Clockwork: Your Time is Up)——歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類在《歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類》中排名第2名。我們精選了部分網友觀點： ...

發條你的時間到了歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類在歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類中排名第2名。

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我們精選了部分網友觀點：

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這個故事是愚蠢的化身。一開始我忍不住笑了。后來我在瓦特帕德上找到了原著。它讓我惡心。它讓我很生氣，我查了一下這個故事的作者。當我寫的時候，他們告訴我所有發生在娜塔莉身上的事，都發生在他們身上。現在，別誤會。很有可能會發生這樣的事情。但是他們接著說，他們想教育人們這個問題。然后我就不高興了。你不會通過一個令人毛骨悚然的阿斯塔故事來教育人們嚴肅的問題。一個主要為了受歡迎的故事

This story is stupidity incarnate. At first I couldn't stop laughing. Then I found the original on Wattpad. It make me sick to my stomach. It made me so mad that I looked up the author of said story. When I wrote then, they told me that all of what happened to Natalie, happened to them. Now, don't get me wrong. It's very possible that something like this Could happen. But then they went on to say that they wanted to educate people of the problem... Then I got upset. You don't educate people of Serious issues, through a Creepypasta story. A story primarily made for popularity.

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這個故事是愚蠢的化身。一開始我忍不住大笑。后來我找到了原始的瓦特帕德。它讓我惡心。它讓我很生氣，我查了一下這個故事的作者。當我寫的時候，他們告訴我，所有發生在娜塔莉身上的事，都發生在他們身上。現在，不要誤會我。很可能像這樣的事情可能會發生。但后來他們繼續說他們想教育人們這個問題。然后我就不高興了。你不能通過一個令人毛骨悚然的阿斯塔故事來教育人們嚴肅的問題。一個主要為了受歡迎的故事

This story is stupidity incarnate. At first I couldn't stop laughing. Then I found the originalon Wattpad. It make me sick to my stomach. It made me so mad that I looked up the author of said story. When I wrote then, they told me that all of what happened to Natalie, happened to them. Now, don't get me wrong. It's very possible that something like this Could happen. But then they went on to say that they wanted to educate people of the problem... Then I got upset. You don't educate people of Serious issues, through a Creepypasta story. A story primarily made for popularity.

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娜塔莉的眼睛有多大？另外，如果她縫了嘴，她可能會說得有點像漢尼拔·萊克特。事實上，我想象過她手里拿著兩個刀片的發條，染著血的灰色外套，深色的頭發和正常的石灰色眼睛。是的，這并不準確。發光的眼睛是如此逼真

How big was said clock Natalie put in her eye? Plus if she stitched her mouth she would possibly talk sort of like Hannibal Lecter. I actually pictured Clockwork with two blades in her hands, blood staining a grey coat, and having darker hair and normal lime colored eyes. Yeah that wasnt accurate. And the glowing eyes are EVER SO REALISTIC

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語法太糟糕了，我受不了。娜塔莉是個可笑的殺手杰夫，整個故事糟透了。它充滿了毫無意義的血腥，沒有真正的情節-它的全部目的是作為一個什么樣的人會成為杰夫的幻想。現在我只是想知道為什么我甚至懶得讀它

The grammar was so horrible that I could not stand it. Natalie is a ridiculous Jeff The Killer ripoff, and the whole story just sucks. It's filled with pointless gore and has no real plot- the entire point of it is to serve as a fangirl fantasy of what it would be like to be Jeff. Now I'm just wondering why I even bothered to read it.

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關于這個故事的一切都是愚蠢的化身。當我第一次聽到它的時候，我忍不住笑了起來。這是一個沒有亂倫強奸兒童的故事。我以為這一定是一個巨魔面食。但后來我發現原來的，這讓我惡心。我最終找到了那個人。我給他們寫信。他們試圖讓我相信這一切都發生在他們身上。現在我不是說這是不可能的。但是他們說他們試圖解決這個問題。如果不是一個令人毛骨悚然的故事，一個恐怖的故事，我會接受的為了受歡迎

Everything about this story is stupidity incarnate. When I first Heard it, I couldn't stop laughing. (This was one without the incestuous child rape in it.) I thought that this had to be a troll pasta. But then I found the original, and it made me sick. I eventually found out who the person was on the. And I wrote them. They tried to convince me that all of this happened to them... Now I'm not saying it's impossible. But they said that they were trying to address the problem. I would've been ok with that, had it not have been a Creepypasta. A horror story, Made for popularity.

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C級角色：主要這個角色是一個殺手杰夫和瑪麗蘇。作者故意在故事中塑造所有的角色，讓觀眾為她感到難過。所有發生在這個女孩身上的創傷事件都是為了讓觀眾為她感到難過。然后我們都應該為這個愛發牢騷的急躁情緒丁東歡呼，當她不知何故得到了幫助超級能力和躲避子彈就像她在矩陣。其余的角色幾乎沒有深度或個性。陰謀女孩被虐待，欺負，強奸，并慢慢變得瘋狂，因為陰謀。基本上杰夫的殺手。亞瑟的設計是沒有創意和無聊的。他媽的血從哪里貼口袋手表你該死的眼睛縫合你的臉！？

Characters:The main character is a Jeff the killer ripoff and mary sue. The author purposely makes all the characters in the story so the audience feels bad for her. All the traumatic events that happen to this girl is to make the audience feel bad for her. Then we're all supposed to cheer this whiny edgy emo ding dong when she somehow gets superpowers and dodges bullets like she's in the matrix.The rest of the characters have little to no depth or personality at all.PlotGirl is abused, bullied, raped and slowly turned insane because plot. Basically Jeff the Killer.ArtHer design is unoriginal and boring. Where the hell is the blood from sticking a pocket watch your damn eye and stitching your face!?

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我不想說一些冒犯性的話，但這個故事在攻擊性上是愚蠢的。在某種程度上，你可以說典型的音速怪獸是更糟糕的，但至少那些沒有離開我與不尋常的憤怒，這做了

I hate to say something is offensive, but this story is offensively stupid. In a way you could say that the typical Sonic creepypasta is worse, but at least those don't leave me with the unusually anger that this did.

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在我看來，情節的轉變是可怕的。去掉你自己的眼睛，她可能在視覺上沒有任何問題，然后用一個時鐘代替它？這看起來更像是折磨色情片

The plot twist was horrible in my opinion. Removing your own eye, which she probably didn't have any problems sight wise, and replacing it with a clock? This seems more like torture porn than anything else.

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打斗場面是不切實際的，血腥是過度的，這個角色只殺死從恐懼中消失的笨蛋，等等。我可以整天列出為什么這個故事糟糕的原因，但我想你明白的想法

The fight scenes are unrealistic, the gore is way overdone, the character only kills douchebags (which diminishes from the scariness), etc. I could go on all day listing reasons why this story sucked, but I think you get the idea.

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我不喜歡發條。我喜歡她背后的故事，但我覺得她很蠢。比如你為什么要把自己的眼睛摘下來，放一個時鐘在它的地方！我覺得她是在浪費我的時間

I don't like Clockwork. I liked her back story and all but I think she's stupid. Like why would you remove your own eye and put a clock in it's place! I think she's an waste of my time.