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我愛簡,但這個故事本可以寫得更好。至少她在火災后的外表比杰夫更接近真實。人們認為她的皮膚是白的,頭發是黑的,但那就是面具和假發。她真的禿頂了。至少,在我聽到的版本中
I love Jane, but the story could've been written better. At least her appearance was closer to realistic than Jeff's after a fire. People think her skin is white and her hair black, but that's the mask and wig. She is really bald. At least, in the version I heard.
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可怕。和尼娜一樣,她是一個刻薄乏味的角色,一點個性都沒有。最讓我生氣的是,像她這樣的故事毫無創意,她的整個故事都依賴于其他角色杰夫
Horrible. Same as Nina, she is a ripoff and a bland character with no personality at all. The thing that pisses me off the most that stories like her have no originality whatsoever, and her whole story depends on other character (Jeff).
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我真的找到了她超級平淡和瑪麗蘇。杰夫很壞,但很有趣,但這只是無聊,她甚至看起來像一個杰夫ripoff
I really found her super bland and a Mary-sue. Jeff was bad but was interesting, but this was just Boring and she even looks like a Jeff ripoff.
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簡似乎是杰夫的一個很好的競爭對手,也許更好,但這個故事并不好
Jane seems like a pretty good rival for Jeff (maybe even better) but this story isn't good.
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我愛簡,但這個故事主要是關于杰夫和這個故事是短的方式-斯波德曼1000
I LOVE Jane but this story is mostly about Jeff and this story is way to short - spodermanfan1000
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和哈利波特一樣真實注意:那是假的
About as true as harry potter note: that's fake
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我喜歡它的意思,但它沒有最偉大的作品
I loved the meaning of it,but it didn't have the greatest writing ever.
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糟糕的杰夫·里波夫,你只需要知道-暮光之城
Crappy Jeff ripoff, all you need to know - TwilightKitsune
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