無眼杰克XxembermasterxX XxDarkStorm+u PhoenixMothxX(Eyeless JackXxembermasterxXXxDarkStorm_PhoenixMothxX)——歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類

無眼杰克XxembermasterxX XxDarkStorm+u PhoenixMothxX(Eyeless JackXxembermasterxXXxDarkStorm_PhoenixMothxX)——歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類在《歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類》中排名第11名。 ...

無眼杰克XxembermasterxX XxDarkStorm+u PhoenixMothxX(Eyeless Jack XxembermasterxX XxDarkStorm_PhoenixMothxX)——歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類在歐美十大最恐怖的蝦類中排名第11名。

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讓我們看看這個故事的缺點，好嗎？-主人公米奇不僅比砂紙還平淡，一點也不有趣，也不討人喜歡，而且在沒有腎臟的情況下，他還能很好地工作和行走。見鬼，直到醫生告訴他，他才注意到！-第二天晚上發現杰克的時候，米奇給他拍了一張照片，而不是，我不知道，用重物打他，還擊，報警。該死的，為什么他第二次睡在他哥哥家，在他晚上做了腎臟切除手術之后？呆在醫院怎么樣？或者找警察護送？-杰克并不可怕。他真的不可怕。他的外表并不是特別令人不安，他的作案手法是可笑的和不切實際的，我們只是沒有足夠的時間去真正害怕這個角色！總之，荒謬的陳詞濫調，可笑的愚蠢的性格決定，以及簡單的…更多

Let's check out the flaws of this story, shall we?-The main character, Mitch, is not only blander than sandpaper and not interesting or likable in the slightest, but also somehow manages to function and walk perfectly WITHOUT A KIDNEY. Heck, he barely even notices it until the doctor tells him about it!-When spotting Jack on the second night, Mitch takes a photo of him, instead of, I don't know, hitting him with something heavy, fighting back, calling the cops. And hell, why did he sleep at his brother's house the SECOND time around AFTER he had something REMOVE HIS KIDNEY at night? How about staying in the hospital? Or getting some police escort?-Jack isn't scary. He really isn't. His appearance isn't particularly unsettling, his Modus Operandi is ludicrous and unrealistic, and we are just not given enough to actually become afraid of this character!In conclusion, the ridiculous amount of cliches, hilariously dumb character decisions, and the plain ... more

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哦，上帝！不是法尼爾！哦，不！-自由泳

OH GOD! NOT THE FANGIRLS! OHHH NO! - Freestyle_Fujoshi

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警告：這個故事包括一個瑪麗蘇。米奇，太蠢了！首先，他怎么不知道臉上有個傷口？第二，當有人把你的腎取出來的時候，你怎么不醒來呢？第三，為什么米奇認為最合乎邏輯的做法是拍一張照片，而不是尖叫？最后一點，為什么警察知道他的死訊，尸體還在那里？老實說，這是我讀過的最糟糕的故事

Warning: this story includes a Mary-sue. Mitch, is so stupid! First of all, how does he not realize there's a cut on his face? Second of all, how do not wake up while someone is taking your kidney out? Third, why did Mitch think the most logical thing to do was take a picture of the thing instead of maybe, I don't know, screaming? And lastly, how come the guys body was still there even though the police knew about his death? Honestly, the worst story I've ever read.

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這個故事毫無意義，甚至作者也承認它很糟糕。它可以用一句話來描述：一個邪教從哪里冒出來，讓一個男孩瞎了眼。別忘了吃人。現在既然你知道了，就不要讀這個故事了。—XxembermasterxX

The story made no sense whatsoever even the author admitted it was bad. It can be described in a sentence: A cult which appeared out of no where made a boy go blind p.s don't forget the cannibalism. There now since you know it don't read the story. - XxembermasterxX

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呃，是少數幾只真正可怕的毛骨悚然的蝦類之一。不是最可怕的，但比許多毛骨悚然的蝦類都好——黑色風暴

Eh, one of the few Creepypastas that are actually scary. Not the scariest, but better than many Creepypastas - XxDarkStorm_PhoenixMothxX

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如果結局寫得不好，每個人都是笨蛋

Breif poorly written bad ending and everyone is a dumbass

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他為什么要拍照？！

Why did he take a PHOTO?!

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他的故事無聊，愚蠢，毫無意義。不過我喜歡他^=

His story is boring, stupid and makes no sense. I like him though. =^v^=