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我受不了這個怪胎。就像,真的,兇手杰夫已經是一個可怕的故事了,但這和怪胎的每一件小事都是矛盾的。其次是戀童癖,這太老套了。他們想讓我們關心他們之間的關系,但他們花在這上面的時間非常少,使它變得無聊和令人毛骨悚然。也就是說,它比大多數甚至所有的“殺手”毛骨悚然的阿斯塔斯都要好,因為至少作者試圖使它與眾不同,而且它沒有那個愚蠢的第二個名字
I can't stand this creepypasta. Like, really, Jeff the Killer was already a horrible story, but this contradicts every small thing of that Creepypasta. Next to that there is Pedophila in it, and it is so cliche. They want us to care about their relathionship, but they spend extremly little time on it, causing it to be boring AND creepy. That being said, it is better than most (if not all) of the " --- the killer " creepypastas, since at least the author tries to make it diffrente, and it doesn't have that silly second name thing.
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另一個非原創的OC,使用另一個令人毛骨悚然的蝦類成為流行,并一如既往:可能只是芳吉爾誘餌
Another unoriginal OC that uses another creepypasta to become popular, and as always: Probably just fangirl bait. - XxembermasterxX
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我喜歡他,但也許有些東西可以改變,但我不知道是什么
I like him, but maybe something could change, but I don't know what.
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我讀過的最老套的鬼話。-阿林金
Most cliche Creepypasta I have EVER read. - AlienKing
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他很酷,但很老套
He is cool but is very cliche
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我想沒關系
It was okay,I suppose.
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杰夫斯的臉怎么了
What hapened to jeffs face
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…為什么?
...Why?
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連真正的劉都是這樣的
Thats how even how the REAL liu looks like...
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